Dear diary,
Today was a pretty good day. In the morning my mom made me tasty breakfast: sereal with fuits, a strawberry cake and yoghurt. It made my day, because breakfast is a very important thing and I just like to eat. I packed my backpack and met my friend Jake. On the way to school we talked about a brand new car, that his dad bought the day before. I like cars. They are so big and fast, but it's a pity, that i won't be able to drive one. By the way, I've got A on chemistry. It's my little victory, because I don't really understand this subject. Hovewer, something ruined my mood anyway. At lunch I got a little puzzled and pushed a girl in front of me. I didn't pour my milk on her or something, but she started screaming at me. But then she turned her head and saw that I had some problems with my eyes and started to apologize, even though it was my fault. I hate when people act like that. They see, that I'm half-blinded and just get too nice, that I want to puke. I don't like to get a lot of attention. I don't need it. Anyway, after that I went home, had a nap and decided to write here about my day.
Well, I have to do my homework. I'll write tomorrow.
Today was a pretty good day. In the morning my mom made me tasty breakfast: sereal with fuits, a strawberry cake and yoghurt. It made my day, because breakfast is a very important thing and I just like to eat. I packed my backpack and met my friend Jake. On the way to school we talked about a brand new car, that his dad bought the day before. I like cars. They are so big and fast, but it's a pity, that i won't be able to drive one. By the way, I've got A on chemistry. It's my little victory, because I don't really understand this subject. Hovewer, something ruined my mood anyway. At lunch I got a little puzzled and pushed a girl in front of me. I didn't pour my milk on her or something, but she started screaming at me. But then she turned her head and saw that I had some problems with my eyes and started to apologize, even though it was my fault. I hate when people act like that. They see, that I'm half-blinded and just get too nice, that I want to puke. I don't like to get a lot of attention. I don't need it. Anyway, after that I went home, had a nap and decided to write here about my day.
Well, I have to do my homework. I'll write tomorrow.
That girl should be more polite to other people next time,in spite of they are sick or net.Take no notice on such people)
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Dear diary,
Today was a pretty good day. In the morning my mom made me tasty breakfast: *Cereal with *fRuits, a strawberry cake and yoghurt. It made my day, because breakfast is a very important thing and I just like to eat. I packed my backpack and met my friend Jake. On the way to school we talked about a brand new car that his dad bought the day before. I like cars. They are so big and fast, but it's a pity, that *I won't be able to drive one.
By the way, I've got A on chemistry. It *was my little victory, because I don't really understand this subject. *HoWeVer, something ruined my mood anyway. At lunch I got a little puzzled and pushed *THE girl STANDING in front of me. I didn't pour my milk on her or something, but she started screaming at me. But then she turned her head and saw that I had some problems with my eyes and started to apologize, even though it was my fault. I hate when people act like that. They see, that I'm half-blinded and just get too nice, that I want to puke(*very rude sentence). I don't like to get a lot of attention. I don't need it. Anyway, after that I went home, had a nap and decided to write here about my day.
Well, I have to do my homework. I'll write tomorrow.