Recently, my fate made me a gift. It was fortuitous meeting with my old friend – Regina . We had become friends way before we met in the bus, which was packed as sardines lately. Together
we got out in wrinkled clothes at the
next stop and started to talk a blue streak.
Regina was a fairy girl, happy as a clam , there seemed the world was her oyster. I was slightly
older than she. The
thing I like about her was the milk of
human kindness. Regina
studied at the University of Medicine , in the Pharmacologic Department. She had an outstanding achievements in studies. Regina was clever and hard-working, everything was a piece of cake for her.
Well about me…I had a pile of complexes, fearing I would have an egg on my face. But I did well
in studies, it was readily. I didn`t like to cry
in my beer when something was amiss.
We had
a lot of differences and at the same time, we were two peas in a pod. We didn`t mince the words and always told the truth
each other, chatted about everything.
Regina was my friend
for life…We dreamed about finishing our studies, that we would bring home the bacon and we would became independence. But I was always
for the proverb "a bird in the hand is worth two in the brush" , and she was for the "pie in the sky".
Unfortunately, our paths diverged us for a long time , but now, we are together
again!
Such a touching and vivid story! But there are some mistakes:
ReplyDelete1) It was fortuitous TO MEET
2) "there IT seemed that" or "it seemed that"
3) Sequence of tenses: The thing I likeD about her was the milk of human kindness.
4) I guess it was "MEDICAL University"
5) It`s better to say "I did well in studYING"
6) It`s better to say "I did it readily" (охотно)
7) independANT (adj.)
Thank you for your comment.But in 1st s. i wanted to say not It was fortuitous TO MEET. meeting-зустріч,як іменник, а не дієслово.
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